[projectaon] Editor's Companion Submission

The following was sent from the Editor's Companion form
   From: Andre Davidson <andre.davidson@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
   Date: 18:58:23 on Wednesday, June 7, 2006
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(??) 17tdoi imprvdsc: Arrow-like missile, launched by a Sun Lord. -> Arrow-like 
missile launched by a Sun Lord. [ad: Again, just a grammatical correction.  I 
don't believe this comma should be here.]
(??) 17tdoi equipmnt: add 3 to any number that you pick from the Random Number 
Table, when using the Bow. -> add 3 to any number that you pick from the Random 
Number Table when using the Bow. [ad: grammatically speaking, I don't believe a 
comma should be there.]
(??) 17tdoi equipmnt: Quiver (Special Items) This contains six Arrows, record 
them on your Weapons List. -> Quiver (Special Items) This contains six Arrows. 
Record them on your Weapons List. [ad: It would seem to me that instead of a 
comma there should be a period here or at the very least a semi-colon.  But 
under Laumspur potion there are two sentences, so seperate sentences would keep 
it consistent.]

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