[projectaon] Re: Editor's Companion Submission

On 6/7/06, pamail.cgi@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx <pamail.cgi@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: 
The following was sent from the Editor's Companion form
   From: Andre Davidson <andre.davidson@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
   Date: 16:26:52 on Wednesday, June 7, 2006
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(??) 17tdoi tssf: develop your innate Grand Master Disciplines, and grasp the fundamental secrets -> develop your innate Grand Master Disciplines and grasp the fundamental secrets [ad: I don't believe that comma should be there since what follows after it is a sentence fragment and not something that can stand alone as a sentence.] 

Fixed. Thanks for looking the book over.

BTW, you received two copies of the message because you're on the list
and it automatically CCs you as well. In case you were worried, you
didn't do anything wrong. ;)

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Jon

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