[projectaon] Editor's Companion Submission

The following was sent from the Editor's Companion form
   From: Andre Davidson <andre.davidson@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
   Date: 16:26:52 on Wednesday, June 7, 2006
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(??) 17tdoi tssf: develop your innate Grand Master Disciplines, and grasp the 
fundamental secrets -> develop your innate Grand Master Disciplines and grasp 
the fundamental secrets [ad: I don't believe that comma should be there since 
what follows after it is a sentence fragment and not something that can stand 
alone as a sentence.]

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