[projectaon] Re: Editor's Companion Submission

  • From: Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Thu, 16 Dec 2010 14:53:57 +0000

On 13/12/2010 03:11, pamail.cgi@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

The following was sent from the Editor's Companion form
    From: Benjamin Krefetz<krefetz@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
    Date: 03:11:30 on Monday, December 13, 2010
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(er) 03tcok 160: If you have the Kai Discipline of Hunting, turn to 204.  If you have the 
Kai Discipline of Animal Kinship, turn to 318.  If you wish to leave the tent and attack 
the Baknar, turn to 78. [BK: The way it's written, turning to 204 and 318 are mandatory 
choices if you have Hunting or Animal Kinship, respectively.  That makes the phrase 
"If you wish to leave the tent" odd because you can only take that choice if 
it's your only choice.]

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Hmm. Escalated.
I'm not sure how many other instances throughout the books this would set a precedent for changing, though. 

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Simon Osborne
Project Aon

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