[projectaon] Re: Editor's Companion Submission
- From: Ingo Kloecker <projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Mon, 13 Dec 2010 10:23:53 +0100
On Monday 13 December 2010, pamail.cgi@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx wrote:
> The following was sent from the Editor's Companion form
> From: Benjamin Krefetz <krefetz@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
> Date: 03:11:30 on Monday, December 13, 2010
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> (er) 03tcok 160: If you have the Kai Discipline of Hunting, turn to
> 204. If you have the Kai Discipline of Animal Kinship, turn to 318.
> If you wish to leave the tent and attack the Baknar, turn to 78.
> [BK: The way it's written, turning to 204 and 318 are mandatory
> choices if you have Hunting or Animal Kinship, respectively. That
> makes the phrase "If you wish to leave the tent" odd because you can
> only take that choice if it's your only choice.]
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Given the texts of sections 204 and 318 turning to those sections is
indeed (kind of) mandatory. In the German edition the choice "If you
wish to leave the tent [...]" is the first choice. I'm not sure whether
this is supposed to indicate that the other two choices are not
mandatory. Then, on the other hand, Lone Wolf probably wouldn't attack a
beast if he knew how to drive it away without harming it. *shrug*
I'd be okay with rephrasing the third choice as "Otherwise you leave the
tent and attack the Baknar. Turn to 78."
Regards,
Ingo
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