My turn! I'm looking over a manual that's been reviewed by a junior editor. He has removed almost every "that" and I'm wondering if anyone has guidelines on when it's *not* ok to remove them. I'm all for streamlining a sentence, but in some cases I think it throws off the rhythm. Here's a sample from a case study: "After analyzing the clients' current financial situation and their savings strategies, you have come to the conclusion [that] they will benefit from some sound financial advice." I don't like removing the "that" in this case because it throws off the rhythm of the sentence. Am I alone here? Is there a term for the way "that" functions in this sentence so [that] I can look it up? Cheri Frazer Editor, Technical Communications department EISI 900 - 125 Garry St. Winnipeg, MB R3C 3P2 Tel: 204-943-3474 ext. 3337 Fax: 204-942-5100