I don't know the context of the book, but I wonder if readers might be confused about who is speaking. Perhaps that can be solved with a chapter title ("Bob Smith and the Blizzard of 1949"), or with a 1-2 sentence introduction at the beginning ("Bob Smith remembers the blizzard clearly"), or simply with a byline or note at the end of the chapter: "Bob Smith survived the blizzard of 1949 and later went on to work for the railroad. The cow was never found." Susan From: kirby.gilman@xxxxxxx To: mea@xxxxxxxxxxxxx Date: Tue, 17 Apr 2012 20:23:49 -0500 Subject: [mea] Re: Quotation mark usage Thanks Clayton, good advice about consistency, and I think I'll probably go with your suggestion about placing quotation marks before and after the entire six paragraph section. The dialogue I mentioned is actually spoken, not in-direct thoughts. Kirby ----- Original Message ----- From: Clayton Bye <ccbye@xxxxxxx> Date: Tuesday, April 17, 2012 6:42 pm Subject: [mea] Re: Quotation mark usage To: mea@xxxxxxxxxxxxx > On 17/04/2012 6:14 PM, Kirby Gilman wrote: > >Hi folks, > >I'm editing a memoir. One chapter is a page long and is all one > speaker talking. It's split up into six paragraphs, with no-lead > ins to who is speaking (always the same guy and it seems to work). > >When are quotation marks used? Just one at the beginning of the > chapter and one at the end? A new quotation mark at the start of > each paragraph, but not one at the end of the paragraphs (except > for the last paragraph)? A quotation mark at the beginning and > end of each paragraph? > >Hope this isn't too confusing, > >Kirby > > There are many Schools of thought, Kirby. The most important > thing you can do is be consistent in whatever you choose. > > For the full page, I would suggest a quotation when he begins > speaking and one at the end of the six paragraphs. As for an > entire chapter? Same thing, unless... Is this self-talk or is > the guy actually speaking out loud. I ask, because one does not > use quotations if he's just listening to the guy's thoughts. > Understood? > Clayton > > > ****MEA Listserv************************ > To reply to the whole list, click Reply. > To reply to one person, click Forward. > **************************************** > >