On 1/19/2011 7:30 PM, a journalist wrote:
But correspondents say the US side is making sure this state visit lacks none of the required pomp.
My take is to skip the conjunction, include a "that," and go positive. Add detail to clarify.
Correspondents say the US side is making sure that this state visit includes all of the required pomp. Festivities include a pas de quatre of painted ostriches, champagne pyramids, and any number of grandees in diamond-studded dog collars presenting their anuses in a ritual show of submission.
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