On May 23, 2010, at 3:25 PM, Mike Geary wrote:
"god was in exceptional form" : ) wonderful, totally unexpected line. Mike Geary Memphis
I'm glad you like it because, in that roundabout way of inspiration, the poem began as a response to this; I heard "pissed" in the English rather than the American sense:
God doesn't hear us, of course, not through all those choruses of singing angels, He thinks we take for granted dawn and all of that. He's pissed. It'll be a hot summer. David Ritchie, Portland, Oregon