[lit-ideas] Re: Dog Poem with alternate ending
- From: David Ritchie <ritchierd@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: lit-ideas@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Mon, 27 Feb 2006 20:04:38 -0800
On Feb 27, 2006, at 7:29 PM, Mike Geary wrote:
Which ending do you prefer?
Me, too, David, the second.
Mike
Thanks to all three of you. I like the second one also, but there was
something about the change of direction and stutter step of the first
that seemed very dog-like. "Un-green" was, however, simply wrong.
David Ritchie
Portland, Oregon
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