[lit-ideas] Re: Dog Poem with alternate ending


On Feb 27, 2006, at 7:29 PM, Mike Geary wrote:




Which ending do you prefer? 


Me, too, David, the second.
Mike


Thanks to all three of you. I like the second one also, but there was something about the change of direction and stutter step of the first that seemed very dog-like. "Un-green" was, however, simply wrong.

David Ritchie
Portland, Oregon

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