[LRflex] Re: I'm an endangered species.


At 21/07/2006, you wrote:

>OK Crew the posted efforts of the past few days have evoked many private and
>online "You've got to do a book responses!"
>
>A blog or other suggestions that have given me a great deal of confidence
>just maybe there's a book after all and the first publisher was wrong in
>turning it down.
>
>I thought this might be a kind of opening piece.
>
>Now it's my turn to ask.   Comments and critiques?


Gee, Ted.  You missed your punctuation, in

 > "Tired? Not me I'm outta here!"

Should be "Tired? Not me!  I'm outta here!"

Otherwise, I (as a non-writer) think it's good!  It would entice me 
to read the rest of the book... and that's the point of an opening 
piece, is it not?

Good luck with it!

Cheers!


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