[LRflex] Re: I'm an endangered species.
- From: David Young <telyt@xxxxxxxxx>
- To: leicareflex@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Fri, 21 Jul 2006 09:20:33 -0700
At 21/07/2006, you wrote:
>OK Crew the posted efforts of the past few days have evoked many private and
>online "You've got to do a book responses!"
>
>A blog or other suggestions that have given me a great deal of confidence
>just maybe there's a book after all and the first publisher was wrong in
>turning it down.
>
>I thought this might be a kind of opening piece.
>
>Now it's my turn to ask. Comments and critiques?
Gee, Ted. You missed your punctuation, in
> "Tired? Not me I'm outta here!"
Should be "Tired? Not me! I'm outta here!"
Otherwise, I (as a non-writer) think it's good! It would entice me
to read the rest of the book... and that's the point of an opening
piece, is it not?
Good luck with it!
Cheers!
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