Michael: Looks very good. Using the *final-draft-2-prov.pdf for page number references: pg 77. Need line space starting with '|' above [GND Pulse Table] pg. 122 - partial tree diagram needs to be redone (Note, the partial tree on page 86 looks good.) pg. 158 i.e. needs a comma 'i.e.,'. check all cases of i.e. and e.g. in document. pg 174: Notes should be Note. pg 176. Prefer heading Type <data_type> or Type <type1> <type2> ... and the text Required where <data_type> must be substituted by one of the entries listed below. For {Format} Table, a separate <type1> <type2> ... are permitted for each column as documented later, but the Tab Type is not permitted. pg. 183 AMI_Version Default <string_literal> Description <string> consistent with pg. 181 - all occurrences of Description <string_literal> should be Description <string> throughout and since this string is not passed to the executable model as a string_literal. Bob From: ibis-editorial-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:ibis-editorial-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Mirmak, Michael Sent: Friday, August 03, 2012 5:34 PM To: ibis-editorial@xxxxxxxxxxxxx Subject: [ibis-editorial] IBIS ver. 5.1, Final Draft 2 for review Please find enclosed, for weekend reading, a provisional Final Draft 2 of the Version 5.1 IBIS specification document. This includes fixes for 24 of the 25 requested changes. The change list and disposition is also enclosed. Note that the compression of the Descriptor section was not done, as this appeared to make the lists nearly unreadable. We will review this document in our next meeting. If these changes are acceptable, this document will be posted for IBIS Open Forum review by Aug. 10, in preparation for the Aug. 24 approval vote. Comments and suggestions are welcome. - MM