[haiku-development] Re: Press Release Contact

Sorry for this top posting, I'm on my phone.

Jorge deserves most of the praise as I just reworded what he wrote for Alpha 1.

Your changes sound good, i'll do them shortly.

Cheers,
Nik

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-----Original Message-----
From: Humdinger <humdingerb@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Sent: 09 May 2010 7:26 AM
To: haiku-development@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: [haiku-development] Re: Press Release Contact

-- Nicholas Otley, on Sun, 9 May 2010 02:02:40 +0100:
> CC'd to haiku-development for feedback.

Well done Nicholas. A few sugestions:

"The purpose of this release is to make a stable development snapshot 
of Haiku available to a
wider audience for more extensive testing and debugging. This will help 
the Haiku
development team identify and address bugs, thus improving the quality 
of the system as
development keeps advancing towards the subsequent development 
milestones."

There are an awful lot of "developments" in that last sentence. :) How 
about:

"The purpose of this release is to make a stable development snapshot 
of Haiku available to a
wider audience for more extensive testing and debugging. This will help 
the Haiku team identify
and address bugs, thus improving the quality of the system as 
development keeps advancing
towards the following milestones."

Is it ungrateful if we don't include Michael Phipps in the special 
thanks? He's rightly mentioned in the about-part, but I don't think he 
had a direct influence on alpha2.

Thanks for working on it, Nicholas!
Regards,
Humdinger

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