Attached and below is a sign-on letter asking for an opportunity for the public to comment on a final draft of a revised Executive Order on national security classification ? prior to it being provided to the President for his consideration. You may know there was an online process for soliciting ideas; this is asking for an opportunity for review of the final product before it goes into effect. Bill Leonard is collecting the sign-ons ? which are welcomed from organizations and individuals. If you are signing on as an individual, please provide your city and state of residence. You may also give an organiz?l affiliation ?for reference only,? if you wish. Please indicate that to Bill. The deadline in 5pm EDT on Thursday, 30 July. Patrice McDermott, Director OpenTheGovernment.org www.openthegovernment.org 202.332.OPEN (6736) From Bill Leonard (former director of the Information Security Oversight Office ? ISOO): For those who were at the public PIDB meeting the other week, you'll recall that I made a recommendation that the public be provided an opportunity to comment on a final draft of a revised E.O. prior to it being provided to the President for his consideration. To me, that is the only real opportunity to impact the process -- otherwise, even well-intentioned officials can misinterpret public comments at best or totally disregard them at worst. As we know, even the positioning of a comma can have critical importance as to the meaning of a policy provision. I do not know if the PIDB will forward this recommendation on to the National Security Advisor. I do know that it was not included in the summary of recommendations made at the public meeting as summarized on the OSTP blog. General James L. Jones Assistant to the President for National Security Affairs The White House Washington, DC 20500 Dear General Jones: We, the undersigned organizations and individuals, wish to commend President Obama for his commitment to facilitating public input into critical national issues. We appreciate your request to the Public Interest Declassification Board (PIDB) that they provide a forum for public input on the review ordered by the President of Executive Order 12958, as amended, ?Classified National Security Information.? By hosting an on-line blog and by holding a public hearing, the PIDB has provided extraordinary opportunities for the public to submit recommendations for revisions to the Order as the review moves forward. In order to provide a truly open and transparent process for revising a critical national policy that touches the lives of every American, we request that, prior to presenting the President a final set of recommendations for his consideration, the public be provided an opportunity, through publication in the Federal Register or a similar venue, to provide comment on the actual language of any proposed revisions to the Executive Order. Soliciting input on the front-end of the review process is commendable. However, the opportunity to comment on how that input is translated into policy is the measure of true transparency, participation and collaboration promised by the President on January 21, 2009. Furthermore, an opportunity for public comment will help improve the final product; in 1993 public disclosure of a near-final draft of the executive order on classified national security information elicited substantial public commentary and contributed to significant revisions of Executive Order 12958 prior to its formal promulgation by President Clinton. We believe this recommended approach best serves the President and, most importantly, the nation. It is also consistent with the President?s commitment to make his administration the most open and transparent in history. ###