<USS Avalon> Re: Shore Leave Without Leaving the Ship (Ranger/Erridim)

Raymond Danner wrote:
Walker, remembering that very conversation, winced, then nodded. She was correct. They then departed the holodeck, rather than her attempt to continue coping with even simulated jerks.
The above should read:
Walker, remembering that very conversation, winced, then nodded. She was correct. They then departed the holodeck, rather than further her attempt to continue coping with even simulated jerks.

(how I missed that glaring an error, I do not know.)

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