atw: Re: Tuesday humour
- From: Rhonda Bracey <rhonda.bracey@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: "austechwriter@xxxxxxxxxxxxx" <austechwriter@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Tue, 27 Mar 2012 10:13:29 +0800
A 'critical incident investigation' is the correct term in OHS parlance, so
'police-critical' etc. doesn't work.
Better would be 'Police are undertaking a critical incident investigation after
a second officer-related shooting in a week.' Or something like that.
Rhonda
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>
> "A police critical incident investigation was under way last night
> after a man was killed by an officer for the second time in a week."
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