atw: Re: Heading reword
- From: "Peter Fagan" <peterf@xxxxxxxxxx>
- To: "Austechwriter (post)" <austechwriter@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Tue, 31 Jan 2006 10:02:25 +1100
"This is the request:
The heading I'd like to replace is: "Just let me ram it home..."
"To summarise" or "To reiterate" have been rejected, but that is what
this section is about."
Janet
As I understand it, the point of the heading is to indicate that the content
that follows reiterates key information in summary form. I would therefore
suggest something like:
"To reinforce..."
or
"To reinforce key points..."
or
"To reinforce key principles..."
or if you prefer to use the present participle form of the verb:
"Reinforcing key points"
or
"Reinforcing key principles"
I share your distaste for "Just let me ram it home..." - vulgar and
inappropriate.
Peter Fagan
IntraDoc Pty Ltd
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