atw: Heading reword
- From: SUNTER Bede <Bede_SUNTER@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: austechwriter@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Mon, 30 Jan 2006 16:38:22 +1100
Greetings
I'm posting this on behalf of Janet Taylor who can't post to this list
but can read responses.
This is the request:
Could anyone help with an alternative to a major heading in a
programming guide that is being re-written in an attempt to make it more
interesting.
People here think this heading is just great. I will have to publish it
unless I can think up a better one.
The heading I'd like to replace is: "Just let me ram it home..."
"To summarise" or "To reiterate" have been rejected, but that is what
this section is about. I wondered about a play on "the big picture", but
I can't get that sounding right, either.
Forty percent of the readers will be Americans, the others will have
English as a second language.
Thank you in advance
Janet
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