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[David Weizades <ddewbofh@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

Hey,

All comments are appreciated, I'd have missed the 2 char indentation on authors 
if you hadn't mentioned it. As it said in the mail I've only done work on the 
first paragraph so far, so the bits on paragraph 2 are still very much WIP. I'm 
keeping a close eye on the readability of things to avoid odd line breaks or 
breaking up words.

Thanks
Dave



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> Date: Tue, 22 May 2007 12:41:59 +0200
> From: niels.reedijk@xxxxxxxxx
> To: haiku-doc@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
> Subject: [haiku-doc] Re: First diff for List.dox
> 
> 2007/5/22, David Weizades :
> >
> > Hi all,
> >
> > Attached is the first diff for the file List.dox in 
> > /haiku/docs/user/support It applies fine here and all lines are proper 80 
> > chars. Only done the first paragraph so far, still getting my bearings. The 
> > next set of changes should come sooner as I pick up momentum. :)
> 
> I've got a few more points on this one:
> 
> - * Documentation by:
> - *  Niels Sascha Reedijk 
> + * Authors:
> + * Niels Sascha Reedijk 
> + *
> + * Proofreading:
> + * David Weizades 
> + *
> 
> The authors and proofreaders should be indented by two spaces, so
> that's three in total after the asterix.
> 
> -  In general, if you know your list is only going to contain a fixed maximum
> -  number of items, pass that value. If you expect your list to have very few
> +  In general, if you know your list is only going to contain a
> maximum number of
> +  items, you can pass that value. If you expect your list to have very
> +few
>    items, it's probably safe to choose a low number. This is as to prevent the
> 
> This change will create one new line with only the word 'few' on it
> which looks a bit ugly.
> According to my column count it can simply be appended to the previous line.
> 
> I hope these comments help!
> 
> Niels
> 

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